Author name: M Pax

Inner Sol vs. Outer Sol

The Great Divide in the Squad 51 Universe

Inner versus Outer Sol

It’s not just space that separates the Inner and Outer Sol colonies. It’s history, power, and a whole lot of snobbery.

Where the Line is Drawn

The line is unofficial but sharp. Everything from Earth out to Saturn is considered Inner Sol. Beyond Saturn—Uranus, Neptune, the Kuiper Belt, and all the scattered rocks and moons in between—is Outer Sol.

The division isn’t just geography. It’s about status.

A History of Control

The Inner Sol colonies were the first wave of humanity’s expansion off Earth. They got the best resources, the cushiest planets, the political power. When the corporations collapsed, those Inner Sol colonies styled themselves as the new heart of civilization.

The Outer Sol? That was something else.

The first Outer Sol colonies were built for one reason: exploitation. They were outposts set up to mine, harvest, and ship resources back to the Inner Sol, supporting their “civilized” lifestyles. The Outer Sol became a dumping ground. Some colonies were founded by workers bound to brutal contracts, others by people the Inner Sol didn’t want.

If that sounds familiar, history repeats itself, even among the stars.

The Mini Suns and the Fight for Independence

It was the invention of the mini suns that changed everything.

The Outer Sol colonies were barely hanging on. Far from the Sun’s warmth, survival was a daily struggle. The Inner Sol colonies developed technology to create artificial suns, claiming they’d “graciously” share them with their struggling cousins.

But the Outer Sol didn’t wait to be rescued.

In a bold move during the second rebellion, the Outer Sol colonies stole the plans and key components to the mini sun technology. It was risky. It was illegal. And it worked.

With access to the mini suns and the natural resources around them, the Outer Sol colonies became truly independent. They no longer needed the Inner Sol’s charity or control.

Lingering Tensions

The split left scars.

In the Inner Sol likes to pretend they’re still the center of the universe. There’s an unspoken belief that being closer to Earth makes you better—smarter, more refined, more civilized. It’s the same kind of snobbery you see in old Earth cities, where living in the right district or having the right name means everything.

In the Outer Sol, that attitude doesn’t go unnoticed. Outlings know exactly how the Inner Sol used them in the past and how quickly they’d do it again if given the chance. The Outer colonies don’t forget. They don’t trust easily. And they don’t bow to anyone.

The tension simmers beneath every alliance, every trade agreement, every conversation. It has mellowed over the decades and centuries, but it’s still there.


🚀 Curious about the worlds of Squad 51?
I’ll be sharing more behind-the-scenes looks at the history, tech, and factions of the Squad 51 universe as we countdown to the Kickstarter launch. Follow along to dive deeper into the chaos.

SQUAD 51 LAUNCH

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Project and Writing Update! Ahead of Schedule!

 

🚀 Salutations, interstellar voyagers! 🌟
Incoming transmission: here’s the May report on current missions, new launches, and cosmic adventures!

M. Pax upcoming releases

🚀 Project One: Completing the Space Squad 51 Series

Status: Gaining momentum!

  • Spaceberg: Currently in edits with more spit and polish, and the addition of bonus extras to make the story more immersive. Be on the look out for the launch of the new version in ebook soon! (between end of May and mid June).
  • Space Trash: First edit completed. It’s on hold for a more spit and polish and more bonus extras.
  • Space Hitched: A new addition to Space Squad 51. This bonus story comes between Space Trash and Space Weed. First round of editing is complete. It idles while I write Space Weed.
  • Space Weed: First draft done. First edit done.
  • Space Worms: Another new addition with a rough outline. This new story will be a stretch goal for Kickstarter backers. Don’t miss out!
  • Space Rock: Another new addition with a rough outline. This new story will be another stretch goal for Kickstarter backers.
  • Exciting News: I’ll be creating bonus content to make my stories more immersive from here on out. Bonus extras complete for Space Hitched and Space Weed. Some are done for Space Trash. Will add them in for Spaceberg when the first draft of Space Weed is complete.

Tentative launch date set for August 5th! Sign up for the prelaunch of the Kickstarter Launch Party so you don’t miss out on anything! Launch is getting closer! PRELAUNCH


🌟 Project Two: Third Star Rising

Status: Steady as she goes!

This short story (or novella, if it decides to grow wings) is halfway plotted, with a partial draft already making its orbit.


💭 Project Three: Mood Bubbles (Working Title)

Status: Rising on the horizon!

This story’s emotional atmosphere is 75% plotted, and I can already see its sparkling potential. At an estimated 20,000+ words, it’s set to be a novella that bursts with meaning—and bubbles, of course!


🌌 Project Four: Completing the Rifters Series

Status: Charting new dimensions!

  • The Generals (Rifters Book 5): At 30% plotted, this novel is laying the foundation for epic twists and turns. My target is 70-80,000 words, and it’s going to be worth the wait!
  • Untitled (Rifters Book 6): The final installment is 5% plotted, but hey, the adventure is just beginning. My aim? Another 70-80,000 words of world-saving, dimension-bending awesomeness.

🚀Project Five: Serial, Shroomtopia

Status: In progress on my new Discord channel, Paxport. It’s a freebie. Come join me and let’s get to know each other better.  DISCORD

 

🚀Project Six: Cherry Bomb 9000

Status: Partly written. This will be the next serial on my Discord channel. Ooo. 

 


Keep your comms open for more updates, and get ready for some interstellar stories headed your way soon. One of the short stories will be a freebie for my mailing list. If you haven’t joined the M. Pax Dimension yet, well, get over there! MPAX DIMENSION

Stay tuned for cover reveals and exciting developments as I put my heart into these projects. Until then, happy reading and dreaming!

Stay tuned and peace out,
M. Pax
🚀✨

 

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Why Kickstarter is the Perfect Way to Celebrate a Series and Reward Fans

SQUAD 51 KICKSTARTER

As an author, one of the most exciting things I get to do is connect with my readers in a meaningful way. And what better way to do that than through Kickstarter? It’s a platform that allows me to offer unique features and extras that aren’t available through traditional distribution channels. Plus, it lets you, my amazing readers, become part of the creation process.

For the Squad 51 series, I’m launching a Kickstarter campaign that goes beyond just the books. Here’s what you can expect:

  • Print books: You’ll get your hands on physical copies of the Squad 51 series, perfect for any bookshelf.

  • Bonus extras: Special features like artwork, behind-the-scenes content, and digital goodies will enhance your reading experience and immerse you in the world of Squad 51 even more.

  • An extra book, Space Hitched: This exclusive book will only be available through the Kickstarter campaign, offering even more of the hilarious space adventures you love.

Why Kickstarter? Because it’s not just about funding. It’s about celebrating the series and rewarding the fans who’ve been there every step of the way. I get to offer things I can’t do with traditional publishing, like limited editions, personalized rewards, and sneak peeks into the creative process.

How to Sign Up for the Squad 51 Kickstarter Campaign

Ready to jump in and join the fun? Here’s how you can sign up and support the Squad 51 series on Kickstarter:

  1. Go to the Kickstarter Campaign Page: You can find it [here—insert link].

  2. Choose Your Pledge Level: You can support the campaign at various levels, depending on what extras you want, whether it’s a single ebook or a full collection with prints, digital bonuses, and Space Hitched.

  3. Follow the Progress: Once you back the campaign, you’ll get updates on new content, stretch goals, and cool rewards as the project progresses.

  4. Enjoy the Rewards: Once the campaign is successfully funded, you’ll receive your rewards—whether that’s a special edition, signed books, or other fun bonuses.

With Kickstarter, you’re not just buying a book; you’re supporting the creation of something special, and I can’t wait to celebrate Squad 51 with all of you.

SQUAD 51

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Twisters #MovieReview

Twisters – A Missed Opportunity for a Thrilling Disaster Flick

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As a fan of disaster movies, I was excited to see Twisters, but unfortunately, it didn’t live up to my expectations. While it has its moments, this sequel/reboot ultimately feels like a missed opportunity, offering a retread of familiar ground without adding enough new thrills or excitement.

Too Much Racing, Not Enough Twister
One of the main issues with Twisters is the pacing. A lot of the movie is spent watching trucks and cars race across the landscape in an attempt to reach a twister. These scenes drag on and don’t build the tension in a meaningful way. Sure, there are moments of visual excitement when the tornadoes appear on screen, but the buildup to those moments is often lackluster and drawn out. It feels like the movie is more interested in showing us the journey to the disaster than the disaster itself, which is a bit of a letdown for fans of the genre.

Visually Exciting, but Familiar
When the action picks up, the visual effects do provide some stunning moments. The tornadoes themselves are impressive, and the scenes where the storm wreaks havoc can be visually engaging. However, these moments don’t quite compensate for the predictability of the story. It’s the same basic formula as the original Twister—a group of people racing against time and nature to confront an unstoppable force—but with a few twists that end up feeling predictable instead of interesting.

Not Cheesy Enough for Fun, Not Thrilling Enough for Drama
Another downside to Twisters is its tone. It’s not cheesy enough to fall into the guilty pleasure category, like some of the best disaster films, but it’s also not thrilling enough to be taken seriously. The stakes never feel high enough to make you care deeply, and the drama lacks the energy to carry the film. It’s as if the filmmakers tried to strike a balance between grounded realism and outlandish disaster spectacle, but neither aspect is fully realized, leaving the movie feeling a bit flat.

References to the Original, But Not Enough Substance
While there are some references to the original Twister film, they feel more like fan service than meaningful callbacks. The story doesn’t add anything particularly new or exciting to the genre. Instead of taking the concept in fresh, unexpected directions, Twisters mostly feels like the same movie with a few minor tweaks.

Final Thoughts

I give it 3 beers. It might be more fun then. Twisters isn’t a disaster movie I’d recommend unless you’re a die-hard fan of the genre or the original film. It doesn’t offer anything groundbreaking and spends too much time on predictable plot points instead of focusing on what makes disaster movies fun—over-the-top action, crazy destruction, and thrilling, heart-pounding moments. If you’re looking for a truly exciting and fresh disaster flick, Twisters might leave you disappointed.

Here’s the trailer:

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DAT is for Disaster

 

A free bonus scene from the Squad 51 Universe.

DAT on Rhea

Artificial sunrise spread over Rhea, lighting up the domes and avenues of Demetehar in soft golden tones, bathing the moon in the same color as Saturn and its inspiring rings. The suns were so far away, Nikili Echols didn’t know the difference between an actual sunrise and one generated by the dome sweeping invisibly overhead. The gases emitted by the shielding of the dome turned the sky the right shade of blue, but she had only lived on colonies and knew nothing of Earth’s ways.

Dressed in her shiny new red uniform embellished with the markings due to a chief, she blinked against the onslaught of pride and the beauty before her. “I did this,” she whispered.

“You look dashing and are up awful early.” Lucy Ashida joined Nikili at her side. “I suspected you would be.”

“Everything must go perfect today. It is the official opening of DAT (Disaster Aversion Team). Our dream to make the Sol a safer place.”

Lucy inched closer. “I like the way you said our.”

“I couldn’t have done any of this without your help. You’re my dearest friend.” Nikili focused on her friend for a few seconds, smiling warmly.

“Are those tears in your eyes?” Lucy’s thumb swiped them away.

“We’re lucky to be here after Spaceberg. I mean, that monster chunk of ice took out Titan. I’m surprised the Saturn System welcomed us at.”

“Hmm,” Lucy replied. “Some not so much.”

“There are always the Innling snobs.”

“Always.”

“They hate when an Outling shines.”

“You shine so bright.”

A blush crept into Nikili’s cheeks, warming them, tickling her mouth into a broader grin. “I can’t wait to show this off to the ORS (Orbital Rescue Services) and CHOPs (Council of Human Occupied Planets) dignitaries later.”

“They’ll be impressed. To think this was an abandoned warehouse and an eyesore. It’s no wonder the governor gave us this building.”

“A relic from the rebellion against the corporations, I’m surprised the citizens of Rhea allowed it to stand as it was for so long.”

“Perhaps as a reminder.”

“To know where we came from is sobering. The Sol has come a long way.”

“And still has a way to go.”

“Let’s look around inside and make sure everything is set up as it should be. Will you run through the ceremony with me too? It must go perfect.”

Lucy brushed long strands of dark hair away from Nikili’s face. “I love when you wear your hair down.”

Exotic, powerful, and lively, Lucy Ashida never failed to catch Nikili’s attention. She wore her dark hair in perfect long ringlets and had also put on her dress uniform. “Lead the way, Chief Echols.”

Nikili caught Lucy’s hand, squeezing. “I love the way the title and my name go together.”

“You’re as shiny as a kid getting what they want,” Lucy laughed. “The title is well deserved and suits you.”

“Thank you, Captain.” She dropped Lucy’s hand and led the way inside the gleaming new station. Most of the building was a hangar with the fleet of new Hueys, the red rescue vehicles capable of space flight, parked on their launch pads. The ships sat ready under sections of the roof that opened and retracted to allow the Huey’s to launch. Besides the hangar, there was a small front lobby, a large briefing room, a gym, the bunks and locker room, the kitchen and recreation area, dispatch, and a few offices off the briefing room. Everything had a new, untouched look to it.

“I almost hate walking around in here,” Nikili commented. “Our shoes are messing up its perfection.”

“DAT has no purpose without us, so we make it more perfect,” Lucy replied.

Chairs, a podium and a small pool were set up in the briefing room. The pool sat between the podium and the first row of chairs. The slanted sides around the pool made it appear as if it was a permanent part of the station. Nikili walked up to it, her hands clasped behind her back.

“Do you think the jump the shark ceremony is necessary?” she asked Lucy.

“This is a huge accomplishment, Nikili. Others before you have tried to set up a Sol-wide emergency team to watch for, coordinate, and respond to emergencies throughout the Sol. “Yes, the pomp is necessary.” She took Nikili’s hand and led her to the back, retracing their steps. “Let’s practice and do the run-through like you suggested. Everyone is sitting out there waiting for you.”

“Except Saverna,” Nikili frowned. “She said she probably couldn’t make it.” Her daughter had mostly forgiven her for the years she neglected Saverna, but their relationship had more mending to do.”

“She’s in college, Nikili, and has her own life. You must trust she loves you and will be there when it counts.”

“I feel like today counts.”

“Don’t hold it against her. You’ll never fix your relationship with her if you do.”

“You’re right. Let’s get on with the ceremony.”

“Right. Everyone is sitting there, the music starts.” Lucy snapped her fingers. “E51,” she called to the DAT AI, “start the music.” A loud club number rattled the walls, the heavy bass thrumming the floor.

“That doesn’t sound like The Honor of Stars processional, E51.”

“My apologies, Chief Echols,” the AI responded. “The selection was altered.”

“By whom?”

“Oh, I can make a few guesses.” Lucy shook her head. “Let’s make the most of it, Nikili.” She shimmied and grooved up the aisle. Nikili joined her, bumping her hip from time to time and laughing.

“Change it back to The Honor of Stars, E51,” Nikili commanded.

“Aye, Chief.”

Pretending the room was filled with dignitaries, Nikili quit dancing, stood tall and strode the rest of the way up the middle aisle, stopping at the pool. “Should we queue the shark and jump it?”

“I think we should practice,” Lucy said.

“E51, queue the hologram.”

A giant rabid mouse loomed up from the pool with sharp fangs. Not expecting something so big and freaky, Nikili jumped back and grabbed a chair. She swung it over her shoulder, ready to attack the creature. “Not a shark, E51. I assume that was altered too.”

“My apologies, Chief.” The hologram shifted to a shark, swimming calmly in the pool.

Nikili started up the sloped edge, slipped and fell face first into the pool. Pushing herself out of the water, she sat up, gasping and sputtering. “I think the edge is too steep.”

“Let me try and double check.” Lucy got a running start and made it up the ramp easily. However, she didn’t make it to the other side, her toes barely touching the side of the pool. Her lost footing dunked her into the pool, soaking her thoroughly. “Too steep and too far.”

Nikili laughed at the soaked and dripping Lucy. “A ceremony to remember.”

“Indeed.” Lucy chuckled.

“Let’s get this fixed.” Together they adjusted the sides of the pool to be closer together and not as slanted. They test jumped it several times before going onto the next part of the ceremony.

“Time for your speech,” Lucy said and sat in the front row. She stared up at Nikili with affection and encouragement.

Nikili cleared her throat. “Tragedy should never happen, but when it does, we must take the lessons and make the Sol better. DAT takes the tragedy of Spaceberg, the loss of Titan and so many souls, and keeps their memory by making sure something like Spaceberg never happens again. Thank you for your commitment and support in making DAT a reality. Yada, yada, yada.”

Lucy clapped and pointed at the cake to the side of the room. “I’ll wheel this over and light it while we sing to honor the Sol and first responders.”

“I love that song,” Nikili beamed. “On the edge, we stand as one. In the dark, we’ll see it done. With the stars to guide our way, we’ll face the night, we’ll save the day.”

Tapping her hand to her hip, Lucy kept the beat and joined in. She then lit the candle on the cake commemorating the citizens lost during Spaceberg. The wick fizzled and the cake promptly exploded. Frosting and cake coated them and covered everything in the room.

Not knowing what to think or say, Nikili stood frozen for several seconds with her mouth gaping. “Are we cursed, Lucy?”

Lucy scraped cake off Nikili’s face and ate it. “You taste good.”

Laughing, Nikili surveyed the room. “What a mess. We better get this cleaned up.” They walked into the foyer to get to the cleaning supplies. Saverna kneeled at the front door, setting down a mat.

“Wh-what happened?” Saverna’s eyes went wide.

“A few snafus.” Nikili waved her hand like it was no big deal. “Did you bring the mat?” The mat was shaped like a shark and said welcome.

“Yeah.”

“Aww. I’d hug you but…” She indicated her cake covered self. “Thank you, Savs. I didn’t think you were coming.”

“This is a big deal. I didn’t want to miss it, Mom.” She stood and glanced into the cake-splattered room. “Why don’t the two of you get yourselves cleaned up, and I’ll take care of the cake.” She took the cleaning supplies from Nikili and Lucy.

“You’re the best, kid.” Unable to help herself, Nikili leaned in and kissed her daughter on the cheek. “E51, order a new cake.”

“Already did, Chief.”

She walked with Lucy to the locker room. “I thought this day was adding up to a disaster, but now it’s perfect.”

 

 

 

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#SciFi Worth Reading: Alien Summer #BookReview

 

🌌 Alien Summer: A Mind-Bending, Unreliable Adventure

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For my book club read at work, I chose Alien Summer by Robert Bayley, an indie novel that I picked up for my Kindle. Our theme for the month was summer, and I’ll admit, I didn’t know exactly what I was in for when I started this one—but boy, was I in for a ride.

A Summer Read Like No Other

At first, I thought Alien Summer was going to be a classic alien encounter story, full of intergalactic adventure and maybe a few too many predictable tropes. But I was completely wrong—and I absolutely loved that. This novel quickly defied my expectations and became something far more complex and thought-provoking than I anticipated.

The story is told through the eyes of a very unreliable narrator, and I mean very unreliable. Like, wow. There were moments when I genuinely wasn’t sure what was real and what was imagined. Was it aliens? Was it the narrator’s mental state unraveling? The blurring of reality and delusion kept me hooked, but it also left me questioning what I was reading at every turn.

Unreliable Narrator = Thought-Provoking Journey

Normally, unreliable narrators can be frustrating, but in this case, it was absolutely brilliant. Bayley crafted a character whose perspective kept me on my toes. I spent the entire novel unsure which events actually happened and which ones were the product of the narrator’s perception. And, oddly enough, I didn’t mind that at all. In fact, it got me thinking deeply about mental health, how we perceive reality, and the way our minds can trick us.

The themes of perception and mental health are subtle but powerful, and they added a layer of depth that I wasn’t expecting. By the end of the book, I found myself still contemplating the events and wondering whether I had been led to see things in a way that wasn’t entirely true—or was it?

Final Thoughts

Alien Summer isn’t your typical alien story. It’s a unique blend of sci-fi and psychological exploration that will keep you guessing. If you like stories that challenge your perception of reality, this is definitely worth checking out. I was entertained, but more than that, I was left thinking long after I finished the last page.

Happy reading, and here’s to more thought-provoking indie gems! ✨

 

 

 

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