Author name: M Pax

Sci-Fi Worth Reading: Pride and Prejudice in Space Book Review

 

Book Review: Pride and Prejudice in Space by Alexis Lampley

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If you’ve ever wondered what Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice would look like set in space, Alexis Lampley’s Pride and Prejudice in Space answers that question with a delightful and fun retelling. The novel gives us all the characters we know and love—and love to hate—while placing them in an entirely new, futuristic setting. Lampley successfully takes the classic story and makes it feel fresh while staying true to the essence of Austen’s original work.

What I Loved:

One of the things I truly enjoyed about this retelling was the fleshing out of the characters, particularly the Bennett sisters. Lampley brings them to life in a way that adds new depth and complexity, especially in the context of a sci-fi universe. The chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy remains the heart of the story, but there’s a certain freedom in exploring these characters in an entirely new setting.

The extras in the book are a wonderful touch. From drawings to posters, diary entries, and extra communications, these added elements make the story feel immersive and interactive, allowing readers to dive deeper into the world Lampley has created. It’s clear that a lot of care went into these details, and they add a fun layer to the reading experience.

What I Didn’t Love:

Despite my enjoyment, there were a few things that didn’t sit perfectly with me. As much as I adore Jane Austen’s prose, having read Pride and Prejudice countless times, I found myself wishing for more of Lampley’s own voice and less of the original text. I’m a huge Austen fan, but after so many retellings, I longed for something a bit more unique to the author’s perspective. It’s a small gripe, but I felt the author could have deviated more from the source material, especially since she did so beautifully in other aspects of the story.

Towards the end, the frequency of the extras started to feel a bit overwhelming. With something new every few pages, I began to feel like they interrupted the flow of the story. While I appreciated the creativity, it felt like overkill.

Final Thoughts:

Overall, Pride and Prejudice in Space is a clever and fun retelling of a classic. The creative twists, fleshed-out characters, and sci-fi setting offer something new for fans of Austen and sci-fi alike. Despite a few minor pacing issues, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. After borrowing it from the library, I loved it enough to purchase my own copy—a true sign of how much I enjoyed it. If you’re a fan of Pride and Prejudice and sci-fi, this book is definitely worth checking out.

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Worldbuilding Spotlight: The Newshang in the Squad 51 Universe

Gossip, Glowfruit, and Galactic News

image of a newshang at a space colony

Every world needs a place to hang. In the Squad 51 series, that place is the newshang.

What’s a newshang? Think a cozy blend of public library, neighborhood café, and community watering hole, plus better drinks and weird snacks. It’s the one place you’ll find pilots, data analysts, retired asteroid wranglers, and sleep-deprived botanists all in one room, sipping frothy drinks and arguing about what the great cosmic fart was really about.

The Vibe

No one rushes you out of a newshang. These are unhurried spaces where conversation flows, gossip simmers, and news (official and otherwise) filters through in waves. You’re welcome to sit for hours, scrolling galactic updates, people-watching, or recharging after a rough mission.

Some are built into old shuttles. Others sprawl across the lower levels of residential towers. The seating is comfy, the lighting soft, and if you’re lucky, someone’s installed a patio with a view.

Where News Meets Snacks

Newshangs act as community info centers, with walls of curated newsfeeds, public data terminals, and voice-prompt research booths. Need to check the latest shipping lane closures or fact-check a rumor about squid mold in Sector 9? You’ll do it here with a cup of Plasma Roast or a fizzy bubble to gnaw on in hand.

Vendors rent booths inside the hang, dishing out everything from spice crumbs to orbit noodles. There’s no standard menu. Every hang has its own flavor, and part of the fun is discovering what weird local brew or bite they’re serving today.

More Than a Café

The newshang isn’t just a place to refuel, it’s a cultural hub. Depending on where you go, you might stumble into:

  • Open mic nights full of off-key jokes, gooey love songs, and awkward poetry

  • Karaoke battles featuring planetary pop hits and ancient Earth ballads

  • Game nights with logic dice tournaments and holo-chess duels

  • Story time with an elder recounting tales of pre-warp planets

  • Public knowledge nights, where locals debate news reports over mugs of starfoam wine

In the Squad 51 Universe

Squad 51 members often drop by the newshang across the avenue from DAT during downtime between calls. It’s where they grab a drink, catch a headline, or quietly eavesdrop on the buzz around town.

The newshang shows up in Space Trash, Space Hitched, and Space Weed for good reason. It’s not just part of the backdrop, it’s part of what makes the Space Squad 51 world feel familiar. Lived in. Like you could step right into the scene, grab a glowfruit slice, and strike up a conversation with anybody there.

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This Month in the Cosmos: Editing, Progress, and a Launch Date!

 

🚀 Salutations, interstellar voyagers! 🌟
Incoming transmission: here’s the May report on current missions, new launches, and cosmic adventures!

M. Pax upcoming releases

🚀 Project One: Completing the Space Squad 51 Series

Status: in the solar system!

  • Spaceberg: Currently in edits with more spit and polish, and the addition of bonus extras to make the story more immersive. In final edits for re-release. Will be out in the wilds again by the end of the first week in June.
  • Space Trash: Edits complete.
  • Space Hitched: Edits complete.
  • Space Weed: Final Edits in progess.
  • Space Worms: Another new addition with a rough outline. This new story will be a stretch goal for Kickstarter backers. Don’t miss out!
  • Space Rock: Another new addition with a rough outline. This new story will be another stretch goal for Kickstarter backers.
  • Exciting News: I’ll be creating bonus content to make my stories more immersive from here on out. Bonus extras complete for Space Hitched and Space Weed. Some are done for Space Trash. Will add them in for Spaceberg when the first draft of Space Weed is complete.

✨ Launch date set for September 30, 2025! Sign up for the prelaunch of the Kickstarter Launch Party so you don’t miss out on anything! PRELAUNCH


🌟 Project Two: Shroomtopia

Status: Steady as she goes!

Writing the rough draft live in Discord and Substack. Come join me at Paxport!


🌌 Project Three: Completing the Rifters Series

Status: Charting new dimensions!

  • The Generals (Rifters Book 5): At 30% plotted, this novel is laying the foundation for epic twists and turns. My target is 70-80,000 words, and it’s going to be worth the wait!
  • Untitled (Rifters Book 6): The final installment is 5% plotted, but hey, the adventure is just beginning. My aim? Another 70-80,000 words of world-saving, dimension-bending awesomeness. It possibly has a title. Debating: The Sentinels or The New Order. Maybe I’ll come up with something else.

 

🌙 Project Four: Hetty Locklear Series

Status: In the line up after the Rifters series is complete

I’ll be giving The Renaissance of Hetty Locklear a new title and a new cover, but it will be the same content. I have titles for the other three novels that will round out this series and some rough notes for the books.

 


Keep your comm channels open for more updates. One of these stories will be a freebie for my mailing list. If you haven’t joined the M. Pax Dimension yet, well, get over there! MPAX DIMENSION

Until then, happy reading and dreaming!

Stay tuned and peace out,
M. Pax
🚀✨

 

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Join the Space Squad 51 Kickstarter. Your Ticket to Exclusive Bonuses and Galactic Fun!

 

The Space Squad 51 Kickstarter campaign launched September 30th, and it’s packed with everything a space adventurer could dream of! Whether you’re a longtime fan or new to the series, this is your chance to get the ultimate edition loaded with exclusive content you won’t find anywhere else.

Here’s what backers can expect:

  • Bonus-packed ebooks with extra scenes, behind-the-scenes stories, and character insights

  • Signed pages and collectible character cards to treasure forever

  • Detailed maps that bring the wild Space Squad universe to life

  • Weekly exclusive rewards that keep the excitement building throughout the campaign

  • Special print editions for those who love holding the adventure in their hands

By backing the Kickstarter, you’re not just getting incredible swag — you’re directly supporting the creation of more hilarious, action-packed, and uniquely quirky space stories. Every pledge helps fuel the mission and keeps the saga going.

Ready to blast off with Squad 51? Head over to the Kickstarter now and secure your place on the crew!

👉 [LAUNCH PARTY!]

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Fantasy Worth Reading: A Sorceress Comes to Call Book Review

Book Review: A Sorceress Comes to Call by T. Kingfisher

A Sorceress comes to call

If you haven’t yet read T. Kingfisher, you’re missing out on one of the most delightful and twisted authors in fantasy today. A Sorceress Comes to Call is my first five-star read of the year, and it’s easy to see why. Kingfisher has a knack for introducing the unexpected, and with this story, she keeps you on your toes from start to finish.

What I Loved:

What I adore most about T. Kingfisher’s work is that she never lets you guess where she’s going with the plot. You can never predict her twists, and that’s a rare quality in fantasy. It’s one of the things I love most about her writing—it keeps me hooked and always wanting more. The characters are charming and engaging, with plenty of personality and quirks that make them feel real. The sorceress herself is an absolute joy—fun, unpredictable, and fully fleshed out in a way that only Kingfisher can pull off.

There’s a certain magic to how Kingfisher takes familiar tropes—like witches and sorceresses—and turns them on their head. This story is actually a retelling of The Goose Girl, a classic Grimm fairy tale, and Kingfisher’s spin on it is a delightful twist. While the original fairy tale is more traditional, Kingfisher brings her unique sense of humor and unpredictability to the story, making it fresh and exciting.

What I Didn’t Love:

Honestly, there wasn’t anything I didn’t love about A Sorceress Comes to Call. It hit all the right notes for me, with its delightful characters, unpredictable plot, and just the right mix of humor and suspense.

Final Thoughts:

If you enjoy a fantasy that keeps you guessing, A Sorceress Comes to Call is definitely worth reading. It’s yet another brilliant story from T. Kingfisher, filled with humor, heart, and a dose of magic. This was an easy five-star read for me, and I can’t recommend it enough.

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Off-Duty Rescue: Dag Dag and the Sump

 

A story from the Squad 51 Universe…

The showers at Orbital Rescue Services (ORS) were slightly warmer than at home. They still didn’t use water, but some inventive cleansing mist. In ancient lore, Dagney Dagrun had read about hot showers and basins filled with hot water. She honestly couldn’t imagine it. Her squad partner, Kell Wexler, cleaned off in the stall beside hers.

“It was another thrilling day at ORS,” she said to Kell, drawing out the syllables, barely hiding her sarcasm. She could only see the faint shape of him through the distorted transparent panels of the showers.

“Hey, we fixed an oxygen leak. That’s always a good day’s work.”

“Maintenance could have done it if we weren’t so bored.” Dag Dag pushed the stall door open, unconcerned about fully exposing her long, fit body, grabbing the cleansing cloth hanging outside the shower.

More modest in disposition, Kell grabbed his cleansing cloth without opening the door, finished washing, then grabbed his civvies—warm clinging pants and a billowing tunic of soft thermal material. Once dressed, he joined Dag Dag on the benches to pull on his socks and boots.

She wore similar clothes, but they hung more richly on her. There was something about Dag Dag that bordered on regal, which no among of shabby or drab could touch. Her dark curls were cut short, seeming to highlight her high cheekbones.

“Want to—” Kell started.

A robot barged in and spun in circles on the floor at his feet. It flashed the magenta numeral one over its egg-shaped body. It had stubby arms and legs good for no purpose.

“That’s someone’s pet,” Kell said. The thing only rose as high as his ankle. Bending over farther, he peered closely at the thing. “Is something the matter?”

“Pipbit, Pipbit, Pipbit,” the robot squealed, continuing its frantic circles.

“Pets are programmed with their names.” Dag Dag flicked the comm link on her collar and brought up her holoscreen. “Pipbit is licensed by the Chogatti family.” She flicked her screen over to Kell. “Let’s go pay them a visit.”

The robot kept pace with them as they left ORS, waving to the next shift. Dag Dag’s eyes raked over the always exotic Lucy Ashida, and she paused for a moment. “It’s a shame she only has eyes for Nikili.”

“Nikili pretends not to notice,” Kell added. “Sometimes I think she has a thing for Lucy too, but she never quite gets there.”

“Ashida is wasting the best years of her life.” Sighing, Dag Dag waved at Lucy and flashed a flirty smile. Pipbit nipped at her ankles. Blinking at the pet, she shook her head. “All right, little guy. All right. I’m moving.”

“Maybe we should hand this off to Echols and Ashida,” Kell suggested. “I’ve been looking forward to grokking with my buds all shift.”

“Go ahead if you want to. I’ll see what’s up with PipBit and the Chogattis.” The little robot had trouble keeping pace with her long strides.

The dome on Orcus had issues and needed replacing. The government kept saying they were working on it. Like always, Dag Dag grunted at it when they left the ORS station. Because of its issues the streets on Orcus were narrow and the towers bunched up together. Some domes crumbled outside the dome from disuse. No amount of air rations could keep anyone alive in one of those.

PipBit hopped and squealed in a direction away from the Chogatti address. It butted against Dag Dag’s ankles and Kell’s, screeching like a siren.

“I think it wants us to go that way.” Kell squinted at the horizon.

The skies on Orcus were perpetual twilight because of the dome. The closest mini sun, Z’ha’Dum wasn’t as close as anyone would have liked, but it was close enough to make the planetoid more habitable.

“What’s over that way?” Kell asked.

“An abandoned water generator from when the first outposts came to mine Orcus.” Slowing her pace, Dag Dag let PipBit lead the way, its stubby legs churning furiously over the soft materials comprising the avenues.

The materials absorbed sunlight to generate power. The little bit of energy they produced heated the walkways and colony and helped recharge transports. However, the colony wasn’t terribly large, so people tended not to use transports. The surplus energy then went to help power residences and businesses. Everything had to pull double or triple duty on Orcus.

The old water generation factory crumbled at the edge of the dome. Squat and gray and nothing nice to look at, its door dangled askew across the crumbling threshold. Kell took out a scanner from the pack strapped to his hip. “The dome covers the first thirty meters.”

“Well, if PipBit goes farther, we’ll call ORS in.” Dag Dag crossed her arms and ducked her head through the broken door. “This place isn’t safe. I thought it was sealed off.”

“Who are we looking for?” Kell poked the scanner through the door. “The Chogattis have any kids?”

Dag Dag scanned the infor on her holoscreen. Being part of ORS had its perks. She wouldn’t have access to so much data otherwise. “One. A daughter.”

“Name?”

“Tamaree.” Dag Dag took a gingerly step fully inside and called the girl’s name. PipBit kept chirping and went over to a broken tile in the floor. Dag Dag sank to her knees, trying to see into the dark hole. “Tamaree? You down there?”

“Help,” a weak voice moaned from the depths.

“What is that?” Dag Dag asked Kell.”

“An old collection sump.” He swiped the scan onto his holoscreen and a complete schematic of the collection sump appeared with a dot representing Tamaree.

Dag Dag’s breath fogged in the cold air beneath the dome. The faint hum of failing machinery echoed somewhere below, mixing with the distant creak of shifting metal. PipBit chirped again, its little lights blinking urgently as it circled the broken tile.

Kell knelt beside her, tapping commands into his holoscreen. “The sump’s about four meters deep,” he said. “The tile’s weak—looks like it gave way under her weight.”

“Can she breathe down there?” Dag Dag asked, eyes narrowing.

“She’s on the border where the dome often fluctuates. We’ve got maybe minutes before the next fluctuation lets the real Orcus leaks inside.”

Dag Dag rubbed her palms on her thighs, scanning the interior of the old factory. She went over to examine old belting on the broken pump. Drawing a Gyver everything tool from the pack at her hip, she sliced through the belting. It fell limply to the floor. She looked for something sturdy to tie it to.

“Me.” Kell held out his meaty hands. He would hold her no matter what.

Dag Dag didn’t think twice about putting her life in his hands. “All right, Kell. You’re my anchor. PipBit, monitor the dome and the general area. Let me know if anything shifts, breaks, or otherwise. I’m going down.”

Kell’s gaze locked with hers. He drew the belting around his waist and looped both hands through it. “Ready.”

“Me too.” Dag Dag dropped the loose end down the hole and rappelled down the edge of the sump, the cold air biting at her through her warm clothes. She landed lightly on broken pipes and ice shards, careful not to disturb the fragile floor.

“Tamaree?” she called softly, scanning the shadows.

A coughing fit answered her. “Here.”

Dag Dag spotted the girl huddled against the far wall, bruised but conscious. “Where are you hurt?”

Frozen tears bathed the girl’s cheeks. Her lips had turned blue, and her dark curls fell in a tangle over her face. She couldn’t be more than seven. She pointed at her arm.

Dag Dag kneeled beside Tamaree and gently lifted the girl’s arm. The limb dangled at an odd angle.

“Broken,” she muttered. “Clean, though.”

Tamaree whimpered but didn’t cry.

“Tough as an Outling. Your parents are raising you right, kid.” Dag Dag crawled toward the hole and yelled up. “Kell, I need more belting or netting. Something to strap her to me when you pull us up. She can’t hold onto me.”

“On it.” Kell’s boots thudded as he moved through the wreckage above.

Dag Dag pulled out the roll of duct tape from her Gyver Everything tool. She snapped off a length of cracked pipe nearby and tested its sturdiness. “This’ll do,” she said to the dark shadows.

She fashioned a makeshift splint, bracing Tamaree’s arm and taping it securely. The girl hissed but stayed still, her face pale and tight.

Kell’s voice echoed down. “Found belting from a vent flap. It’ll work. Make way.” He dropped the belting down the hole.

Dag Dag retrieved it and hugged Tamaree against her body. She wrapped and wove the belting around herself and the girl, creating a secure sling to bind Tamaree against her. She returned to her lifeline and wrapped it under a leg and around her hands, gripping tightly. “Bring us up,” she called.

Kell loomed like a darker shadow among the shadows above. “Slow and steady.”

The belting smoothly pulled Dag Dag and Tamaree up from the icy floor. Feet dangling, she held tight to Tamaree. The belting strained with their combined weight and Kell’s tugs. The shaft walls creaked, the flooring above groaned, and rust rained down, but the belting and floor held.

After they cleared the hole, they lay on the floor, breathing hard. Kell’s strong arms reached down and righted them. “You all right, partner.”

She managed a tight smile. “Of course.”

“How about you?” Kell grinned at the young girl.

The girl nodded.

“You did great,” Dag Dag said, brushing a curl from the girl’s forehead.

PipBit chirped and did a slow circle around them, its lens eyes flickering blue in quiet triumph.

Dag Dag gave PipBit a quick pat. “Looks like rescuing kids from wells is officially part of the job.”

“Thought that went out of fashion millennia ago.” Kell coiled the used belts into a tidy pile and placed them out of the way. He nodded at the robot. “Good thing you came to get us, little buddy.”

PipBit chirped softly, its lights glowing steady.

They strode out of the factory, Tamaree in Dag Dag’s arms and PipBit trotting behind. “Family and a pet are a good look for you, Dag.”

She managed not to wince. He damn well knew there wasn’t enough adrenaline in family and pets for her. “Say that again if you don’t want to keep your face, Kell.”

He laughed and slung an arm around her. “You’re the best partner ever.”

She didn’t pull away, knowing she couldn’t have a better squadmate or friend. “Windsurfing outside the dome on the ice later?”

“Try to keep me away.”

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